What is happening:
went to talk to Dew Pond for the 2nd time, with the updated paper. but that dialogue option doesn't appear anymore. just, "Yeah?" "What do you want?" leaving me unable to finish the quest.

Steps to reproduce the issue:
if it helps, i'm playing as a unicorn. i have the ground and animal vests already. 2 of the pegasi i talked to in the first part of the quest, are Bagels and Mercury. a third was that guard next to the Evershade portal. i forget the other 2. also, the ! symbol is still above Dew's head, even though the dialogue option itself doesn't appear.